Thursday, September 11, 2008

A Maiden by the Sea



In the dark rainy evening, I took a swim on the cold clear water, It was fun, I am relaxed I floated on the water full of pain.Releases the stress that I have felt then suddenly my friends are calling me, They swim to where I am and it started a conversation. Many things are being discussed.

On a sudden, voice came out from nowhere, we keep quiet as we listen to the voice, we found out that it was a maiden shouting from pain that she is suffering.She shout so hard just to think she could get better.as my friends keeping her company I swim around them listening to her story. Feel sorry for her, yet in my mind I want to ease the pain, take the thorn from her heart, to make her calm. In the water I hold her hand and she hold me tight, I felt she needed me.


Suddenly she stood walk to the shore, I followed her she sat down on the sand sobbing and still crying, i sat in front of her, talked to her and ask her to write the thorn on the sand, she wrote it but it was short, so asked her to do it again, I asked her do you know why I made you wrote this thorn? she answered with a smile like a captured picture on my mind. "That it will be gone", she replied. And it made her stop crying. I don't know what I felt, but i'm glad to see her smile. I realized I was not being there for her for a long time. We talked for the things that happened, we moved to the sea with the rain pouring down on us.

I told here that what ever we felt right now "I hope the Rain wash away the pain" in my mind I want to say this to her "I want to be the rain that want to take away your pain, I want to be the sun that makes you smile, I want to LOVE you maiden by the sea...

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9 Comments:

Blogger eve said...

go for greeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnnn

ajahh!


hehehe!

great!

keep 8 up gov!

September 12, 2008 at 8:17 AM  
Blogger eve said...

halllllalaaaaaaaaa!!!!


kabalo ko sa story ani...hehehehehe


cge lang hilom lang ko....wahahahahaha

September 12, 2008 at 8:42 AM  
Blogger d_hikerz Blog said...

wuie!...
jeffoxx..
kabasa bya ko sa comments nimu kay martin...banntay lnbg ka!..
hmmm!...

sus dong..amping pirme!...ayaw sa kaboang anang gina tawag nila ug gugma!...hahaha

September 12, 2008 at 11:52 PM  
Blogger MartiN said...

gov.. nice au imong profile... pero mas nice gyud ako... blehhh... ahahah

September 13, 2008 at 5:46 AM  
Blogger jai said...

Hi Doy,,,,Nice blog!Kuyawa jud ni gov uy!ulaw man ta ani!Hahay black ang background!jejeje
Always remember...
Smile ;-) GOD IS GOOD ALL THE TIME!

September 13, 2008 at 6:29 AM  
Blogger mark said...

Mustah pagkagov nato?hehehe!nice blog doy!

GOD BLESS doy!

September 13, 2008 at 7:23 AM  
Blogger ako c van2..ok2 sa skul..pitbul sa barkada said...

tae..


ui


tnudanay

na

jud

na

kuy?


hehehe


wel

la

yah
ma do


ane


hahaha


nagma2hal

little sister

GODBLESS


-van-

September 13, 2008 at 8:05 AM  
Blogger Rf-NIGGAH-ONLINE said...

>> mew ka gov.. hehe!!
>> tnx diay.. mwah..

September 17, 2008 at 3:27 PM  
Blogger notym4luv said...

ninnnnnnnnnnndota....................... uieeeeee................

September 18, 2008 at 6:26 AM  

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